The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph indicates the relation between
age
and crime
, and the pie chart presents four kinds of crime
committed last
year in the UK. From the two graphs, it is clear that
the age
of most criminals ranged from 16 to 24 and the most committed crime
type was violent crime
.
It is obvious that crimes started to be committed at the age
of 12 at 5 tens
of thousands
, and the figure surged to 70 tens
of thousands
at 16 years old. In addition
, at the age
of 20, the number reached a peak of 80 tens
of thousands
. However
, the number commenced a downward trend from 24 years old at 60 tens
of thousands
. The rate tumbled to 20 tens
of thousands
at 28 years old, and then
it went down stably to under 10 tens
of thousands
.
Violent crime
occupied the biggest share of the pie chart at 46 percent
, and the ratios of property Change the spelling
per cent
crime
and drug crime
were similar at 22 per cent and 23 per cent respectively. The last
place is public order crime
by 9 per cent.Submitted by wendy190427 on
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