The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph illustrates how much was the level of
the
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crime in
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four
various countries which includes USA,UK,Australia and South Africa over a thirty-five-year period. A glance at the graph reveals that
burglary
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and car theft had a downward trend
at
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the first fifteen
year
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.
However
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,the
rate
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of
robbery
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levelled off with some tiny changes over the period. In 2010,the
number
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of
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burglary
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was just under 3500 and
then
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it hit the
peack
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peak
at nearly 3700
number
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of
incidents
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for
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burglary
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in 2011.(Which was the highest percentage of crime
rate
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over the whole year).Next,the
rate
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of
burglary
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decreased dramatically
untill
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until
1000
number
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of
incidents
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in 2015.Afterwards,
at the end
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of the
trend
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the
number
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of
incidents
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for
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burglary
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reached roughly 1400 in 2019.
Moreover
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,the percentage of car theft was approximately 2700 in 2010,just ahead of the
number
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of car
theft
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thefts
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which was 2600 in 2019.
In contrast
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,the level of
robbery
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was just around
of
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700 in 2010,compared to the
number
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of
incidents
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for
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of
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robbery
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at 500 in 2015.(Which was the lowest amount of crime
rate
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over the period).
Following
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this
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,the level of
robbery
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remained
unchaged
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unchanged
from 2010 to 2019 and reached nearly 700 in 2019.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words burglary, rate, robbery, number, incidents with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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