Band 7+: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart demonstrates three types of main fuel
production
from 1981 to 2000 in the United Kingdom. It can bee
seen from the graph that natural gas showed a stable increase, coal had a downward trend and Correct your spelling
be
the
petroleum fluctuated but Correct article usage
apply
overall
Add a missing verb
had a
a
upward trend.
The Change the article
an
production
level of natural gas remained unchanged for 40 millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
for a decade and then
it grew gradually for another decade from 1991 to 2000 and reached its highest point
at 100 millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
.The production
level of petroleum fluctuated during
1981 to 1990 for 9 Change preposition
from
years
, from its lowest point
at under 100 millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
to stay plateau for
140 Change preposition
of
millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
and it dropped for three years
and then
the number started to climb steadily for the following 10 years
.Coal production
was stable for
80 million Change preposition
at
tonnes
for the first two year
and Change to a plural noun
years
then
it plunged below 40 millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
in 1984, however
, it rose slightly to 60 millions
Change to singular
million
tonnes
from 1984 to 1986, it remained unchanged for four years
, from this
point
it started to decline slowly for the following period, eventually reached its lowest Add a comma
point,
point
under 40 units.
There is a cross point
from 1990 to 1991, as is shown, natural gas and petroleum had a
upward trend, Change the article
an
meanwhile
the number for Add a comma
meanwhile,
the
coal dropped, it can be assumed that the need for Correct article usage
apply
the
coal Correct article usage
apply
were
replaced by Change the verb form
was
other
two fuels.Correct article usage
the other
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, millions, tonnes, point, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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