Band 7+: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Band 7+: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart demonstrates three types of main fuel
production
from 1981 to 2000 in the United Kingdom. It can
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seen from the graph that natural gas showed a stable increase, coal had a downward trend and
the
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petroleum fluctuated but
overall
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a
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upward trend. The
production
level of natural gas remained unchanged for 40
millions
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million
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tonnes
for a decade and
then
it grew gradually for another decade from 1991 to 2000 and reached its highest
point
at 100
millions
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million
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tonnes
.The
production
level of petroleum fluctuated
during
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1981 to 1990 for 9
years
, from its lowest
point
at under 100
millions
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million
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tonnes
to stay plateau
for
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140
millions
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tonnes
and it dropped for three
years
and
then
the number started to climb steadily for the following 10
years
.Coal
production
was stable
for
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80 million
tonnes
for the first two
year
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and
then
it plunged below 40
millions
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million
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tonnes
in 1984,
however
, it rose slightly to 60
millions
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tonnes
from 1984 to 1986, it remained unchanged for four
years
, from
this
point
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it started to decline slowly for the following period, eventually reached its lowest
point
under 40 units. There is a cross
point
from 1990 to 1991, as is shown, natural gas and petroleum had
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upward trend,
meanwhile
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the number for
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coal dropped, it can be assumed that the need for
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coal
were
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replaced by
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the other
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two fuels.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, millions, tonnes, point, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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