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Band 7+: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Band 7+: The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line chart demonstrates three types of main fuel
production
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 from 1981 to 2000 in the United Kingdom. It can
bee
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be
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 seen from the graph that natural gas showed a stable increase, coal had a downward trend and
the
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petroleum fluctuated but
overall
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had a
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a
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an
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 upward trend. The
production
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 level of natural gas remained unchanged for 40
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millions
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million
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tonnes
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 for a decade and
then
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 it grew gradually for another decade from 1991 to 2000 and reached its highest
point
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 at 100
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millions
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million
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tonnes
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.The
production
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 level of petroleum fluctuated
during
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from
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 1981 to 1990 for 9
years
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, from its lowest
point
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 at under 100
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millions
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million
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tonnes
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 to stay plateau
for
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of
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 140
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millions
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million
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tonnes
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 and it dropped for three
years
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 and
then
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 the number started to climb steadily for the following 10
years
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.Coal
production
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 was stable
for
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at
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 80 million
tonnes
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 for the first two
year
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years
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 and
then
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 it plunged below 40
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millions
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million
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tonnes
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 in 1984,
however
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, it rose slightly to 60
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millions
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million
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tonnes
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 from 1984 to 1986, it remained unchanged for four
years
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, from
this
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point
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 it started to decline slowly for the following period, eventually reached its lowest
point
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 under 40 units. There is a cross
point
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 from 1990 to 1991, as is shown, natural gas and petroleum had
a
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an
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 upward trend,
meanwhile
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meanwhile,
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 the number for
the
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apply
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coal dropped, it can be assumed that the need for
the
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coal
were
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was
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 replaced by
other
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the other
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 two fuels.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, millions, tonnes, point, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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