The line graph shows the percentages of Australian export with four countries. The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The given chart compares the figures for the
export
of Australia to four countries between 1990 and 2012. As is shown, both China and India show an upward trend, meanwhile, Fix the agreement mistake
exports
US
and Japan reveal a downward trend.
Correct article usage
the US
To begin
with, it is obvious that the export to China had significant
increase, the number grew slowly from 2 Add an article
a significant
percent
to 5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
between 1990 and 2000 and it rocketed to its highest point at 30 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in the following 12 years. Change the spelling
per cent
In addition
, the number of India climbed steadily, it remained stable in the first decade and then
it rose slowly from 2 percent
to 7 percent
between 2000 and 2010 and dropped only
Change preposition
to only
one
Correct your spelling
1
percent
by 2012.
Conversely
, Japan had the highest percentage over the period yet the trend went all the way down, it went down from 27 percent
to 20 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
then
dropped slowly to its lowest point at 18%. Moreover
, the number of US fluctuated in the first ten years between 9 percent
and 12 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
then
it gradually fell to a low at
6 Change preposition
of
percent
in 2010.
Change the spelling
per cent
Overall
, we can see that Australia
Correct your spelling
Australian
product
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products
is
popular in Asia, especially Correct subject-verb agreement
are
is
very welcomed in China even though the figure in Japan fell over the period, Unnecessary verb
apply
but
the general rate still Correct word choice
apply
exceed
Wrong verb form
exceeded
US
and India.Correct article usage
the US
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