The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Bar Chart displays the
percentage
of females going
into
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university in the UK, The USA,
Australia
, South Korea and France.
Overall
, the
percentage
of
women
going into higher education tends to increase in the five countries.
Australia
is the only country that remained stable
both
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years. In 1980 The UK, USA and South Korea
,
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had a low
percentage
of
women
in universities with around 32%, 39 and 15% respectively. France was the second country with the highest
percentage
of
women
with
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50% and
Australia
has had the highest
percentage
of ladies studying with just below 60%. In 2015 The UK,
USA
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, almost doubled the
percentage
with just over 50% and 60% respectively. Korea increased significantly the number of females in higher education tripled the number in comparison
1980
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with
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30%. The
percentage
of
women
in higher education in
Australia
and France was not
significantly
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in 2015 respect to 1980.
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