The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Bar Chart displays the
percentage
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of females going
into
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university in the UK, The USA,
Australia
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, South Korea and France.
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, the
percentage
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of
women
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going into higher education tends to increase in the five countries.
Australia
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is the only country that remained stable
both
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years. In 1980 The UK, USA and South Korea
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had a low
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of
women
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in universities with around 32%, 39 and 15% respectively. France was the second country with the highest
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of
women
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with
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50% and
Australia
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has had the highest
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of ladies studying with just below 60%. In 2015 The UK,
USA
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, almost doubled the
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with just over 50% and 60% respectively. Korea increased significantly the number of females in higher education tripled the number in comparison
1980
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to 1980
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with
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30%. The
percentage
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of
women
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in higher education in
Australia
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and France was not
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in 2015 respect to 1980.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, australia, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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