The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Bar Chart displays the
percentage
of females going into
university in the UK, The USA, Change preposition
to
Australia
, South Korea and France.
Overall
, the percentage
of women
going into higher education tends to increase in the five countries. Australia
is the only country that remained stable both
years.
In 1980 The UK, USA and South KoreaChange preposition
for both
,
had a low Remove the comma
apply
percentage
of women
in universities with around 32%, 39 and 15% respectively. France was the second country with the highest percentage
of women
with
50% and Change preposition
at
Australia
has had the highest percentage
of ladies studying with just below 60%.
In 2015 The UK, USA
, almost doubled the Correct word choice
and USA
percentage
with just over 50% and 60% respectively. Korea increased significantly the number of females in higher education tripled the number in comparison 1980
Change preposition
to 1980
with
30%. The Change preposition
by
percentage
of women
in higher education in Australia
and France was not significantly
in 2015 respect to 1980.Change the word
significant
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