The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. do you agree or disagree.

There is currently a contentious argument over whether working weekdays should be shorter,

while

other

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others

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think

workers

should be given longer

weekend

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weekends

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. In my opinion, I agree that

workers

should be given longer

weekend

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weekends

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to improve

work-life

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the work-life

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balance atmosphere and

also

improved

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improve

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their mental health.

To begin

with, every individual in the world

aways

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always

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wished

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they had a longer

weekend

to carry out many activities. In today's society, when choosing a job or career most people

tends

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to look for a company that can enable them

have

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to have

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a better work-life balance.

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, at Mackay Regional Council,

staffs

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staff

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are entitled to a roster day off

at

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on

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any day of the week.

Hence

,

this

enables employees to be able to have time for other family matters or personal life

function

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.

Furthermore

, longer

weekend

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weekends

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can

also

help

improved

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improve

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mental

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the mental

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health of

workers

. With longer

weekend

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weekends

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,

workers

can have enough time to relax, spend time with their family,and pursue hobbies, which can significantly improve mental

wellbeing

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well-being

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.

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, statistics revealed in the

vanguard

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newspaper

,

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shows

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show

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that about 80

percent

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per cent

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of

individual

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an individual

the individual

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who

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apply

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missed their

kids

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kid's

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birthday

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birthdays

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due

working

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to working

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on the

weekend

.

Hence

, a longer

weekend

can

folster

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foster

a better life for every individual on the planet. In conclusion, I completely agree that working

weekday

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weekdays

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should be short and

weekend

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weekends

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shoul

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should

be longer because it helps improve life for families

,

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and

also

enhance

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enhances

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prosperity, efficiency, and a positive environment.