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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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Between 1981 and 2000 Main Fuel Production had Highs and Drops , At
the
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first
the
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petroleum production started
in
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 almost 100
EU
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at
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 1981
then
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growed
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grew
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 to 140
EU
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at
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 1986
then
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 got
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dropped
droped
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dropped
 to approximately 100
EU
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 1991 after the drop it raised again in 1996 to be the same of 1986 to stay still until 2000 , After that the Coal was 80
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 in 1981 after that dropped to 60
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 in 1986 until it
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 lower in 1991 with almost 45
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then
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 in 1996 as 40
EU
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 in the
last
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 it was nearly 25
EU
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 in 2000 ,For the
last
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natrural
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natural
 gas started off in 1981 with 40
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 holding itself for the same energy units in 1986 until 1991 it raised to be closely 45
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 in 1996
its
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 had a huge jump to be 80
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 in 1996 and
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 it was 100 in 2000
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fuel production
  • Trend
  • Steady
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant
  • Milestones
  • Turning point
  • Peak
  • Decline
  • Evolve
  • Notable
  • Summarize
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