You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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Between 1981 and 2000 Main Fuel Production had Highs and Drops , At

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first

the

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petroleum production started

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almost 100

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1981

then

growed

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grew

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to 140

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1986

then

got

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dropped

droped

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dropped

to approximately 100

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1991 after the drop it raised again in 1996 to be the same of 1986 to stay still until 2000 , After that the Coal was 80

in 1981 after that dropped to 60

in 1986 until it

become

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lower in 1991 with almost 45

then

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in 1996 as 40

in the

last

it was nearly 25

in 2000 ,For the

last

natrural

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natural

gas started off in 1981 with 40

holding itself for the same energy units in 1986 until 1991 it raised to be closely 45

in 1996

its

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had a huge jump to be 80

in 1996 and

at the end

it was 100 in 2000

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

156 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Fuel production
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

Teenagers should have regular exams at secondary school as this will prepare them better for life after leaving school. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development???

Many people try to achieve success through their career or education. What can success mean to different people? What is your view of success? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The movement of people from agricultural areas to big cities caused problems in both palces. In your oponion, what is the reason for this problem? How can it be solved?