Task2 How to survive job interview what advice can you give? Tell me the interview is the only way? Describe your opinion
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essay about how to survive job
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a job
interview
.and I will also
tell you my opinion.
I think this
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of the best to tell yourselfAdd a missing verb
is one
,
because it reveals your whole personality.On the one hand,there are very few options to check you.I can give you advice about Remove the comma
apply
this
,
because I have experience Remove the comma
apply
about
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with
job
interviews.
Firstly
,you should dress decently and you must look great.Secondly
you have to arrive on time, it would be even better 5-10 minutes earlier.Add a comma
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worry.
On the other hand
,a lot of people afraid
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are afraid
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of this
this
interviews.In our time we have many Correct determiner usage
these
problem
with fear of shine.In my Change to a plural noun
problems
opinion
sometimes Add a comma
opinion,
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interviews
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revealed
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reveal
full
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your full
you
potential.If you fear Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
type of check.I don't
recommend you
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apply
this
.
In conclusion
I can say Add a comma
conclusion,
job
interview
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interviews
not
for everyone.If you Add a missing verb
are not
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have potential in
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job
,because interviews are not the only way.Add an article
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coherence cohesion
Work on creating a more logical structure by clearly organizing your essay into distinct paragraphs: introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Ensure you have a clear and concise introduction that outlines the main points you will discuss in the essay.
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Provide more specific examples and details to support your main points, which can help make your argument stronger and more convincing.
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Elaborate more on how interview techniques can reveal one’s potential and why they might not, to create a more balanced argument.
coherence cohesion
Introduction needs more clarity on the purpose of the essay and the points to be discussed. Revise your thesis statement to align closely with the details in the body paragraphs.
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Good attempt at discussing both sides of the argument, which is important for a balanced essay.
coherence cohesion
Introduction and conclusion are present, giving the essay a complete feel.
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Some helpful pieces of advice on how to behave in an interview and practical steps are mentioned.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.
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