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The bar chart below shows the top tem countries for the production and consumption of rice in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top tem countries for the production and consumption of rice in 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the highest
countries
 in
rice
producing
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production
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 in 2020.
Overall
,
China
 was by far higher than the other recorded
countries
, and its
rice
production
 was almost equal to the sum of
mentioned
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the mentioned
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countries
 except India. Japan and Brazil came at the bottom in
rice
production
 among the 10
countries
.
China
's
rice
production
 was on the top in 2020 with just over 140,000
thousand
tons
. India came right after
China
 with almost a quarter less than
China
's annual produced rise.
While
 Indonesia was in
the
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third place, its yearly
production
 was only one-third of what was India producing. Bangladesh's
rice
production
 was nearly
in
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 the same level
with
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as
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 Indonesia with an annual
production
 of just below 40,000
thousand
tons
. Vietnam produced nearly 25,000
thousand
tons
, which was almost double the annual
production
 of Japan and Brazil. Buma and
Philippines
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the Philippines
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 produce significant quantities of
rice
, and they came in the 7th and 8th places,respectively, with nearly 20,000
thousand
tons
 of
rice
 produced in sum in these two
countries
 in 2020.
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