The line graph illustrates the amount of visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries over a period of eighteen years between 1996 and 2014.

The line graph illustrates the amount of visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries over a period of eighteen years between 1996 and 2014.
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This
graph provides key information about how much money
did
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tourists from five different countries
spend
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when visiting New Zealand between 1996 and 2014. The units are measured in New Zealand dollars.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that,Australia had the highest level of expenditures.
In addition
that
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, The United States of America
whereas
China has the lowest rate of expenses.
According to
what is shown, From 1996 to 2014, All the five countries' rate of profits fluctuated. Australia has the highest growth with nearly 2500 dollars. Following that the USA with about 1500.
In contrast
, China was ranked the lowest among the five nations In terms of Japan and the UK, it seemed that they have a steady rhythm , their expenditure went up
then
down until it steadily reached 700.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrates
  • visitor spend
  • over a period of
  • eighteen years
  • between 1996 and 2014
  • general trend
  • observed
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuations
  • a breakdown of
  • spending habits
  • comparison
  • highest spenders
  • lowest spenders
  • possible reasons
  • economic conditions
  • tourism promotions
  • significant events
  • specific significant peaks
  • drops in spending
  • corresponding years
  • impact of external factors
  • global financial crisis
  • natural disasters
  • summarizing
  • overall trend
  • implications
  • tourism industry
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