The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during and . The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in compared with 2015. Summarise the information.
The bar chart illustrates most income
export
nevenue
in some Correct your spelling
revenue
country
between 2015 and 2016. Units measured by Fix the agreement mistake
countries
billions
. The table demonstrates five different export
goods
percentage
during the period given.
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
Overall
, except gems and jewellery, four export
goods
were increased and petroleum and engineered goods
contribute
Wrong verb form
contributed
Correct article usage
the
compored
to other Correct your spelling
compared
export
goods
.
In 2015, petroleum export
was acquired just over 60 billions
to the country and Change to singular
billion
this
number was
increased in 2016Unnecessary verb
apply
3
% Change preposition
by 3
perc
Correct your spelling
per
cent
. Engineered goods
earnings made up approximately 55 billions
in 2015 and these Change to singular
billion
was
increased 8.5% per Unnecessary verb
apply
cent
in 2016. Textiles
Fix the agreement mistake
Textile
goods
represented 25 billions
in 2015 and the most significant percentage change Change to singular
billion
come
true in Wrong verb form
came
this
subject, the export
sale
Fix the agreement mistake
sales
was
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
15.24
% per Change preposition
by 15.24
cent
in 2016. Conversely
, agriculture products constituted fewer increase during the period given. In 2015, agriculture products sale was 30 billions
and Change to singular
billion
this
number just was
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
0.81
% per Change preposition
by 0.81
cent
in 2016.
Gems and jewellery products comprised just over 40 billions
in 2015 and Change to singular
billion
this
income was
declined in 2016 Unnecessary verb
apply
5.18
% per Change preposition
by 5.18
cent
.Submitted by berivan_yilmazz on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Replace the words export, billions, goods, cent with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
▼