The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates

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revenue in some countries between 2015 and 2016. Units measured by billions. The table demonstrates five different

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goods

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percentages during the period given.

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, except gems and jewellery, four

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goods

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were increased and petroleum and engineered

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contributed

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most income compared to other

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goods

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. In 2015, petroleum

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was acquired

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over 60

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to the country and

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number increased in

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2016 by

3% per

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. Engineered

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earnings made up approximately 55

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in 2015 and these increased 8.5% per

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in 2016. Textile

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represented 25

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in 2015 and the most significant percentage change came true in

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subject, the

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sales increased by 15.24% per

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in 2016.

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, agriculture products constituted fewer increase during the period given. In 2015, agriculture products

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was 30

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and

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number just increased by 0.81% per

cent

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in 2016. Gems and jewellery products comprised just over 40

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in 2015 and

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income declined in 2016 by 5.18% per

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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, goods, billion, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

170 words

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