The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process illustrates information about the steps that need to be taken to recycle
glass
. Overall
, the entire recycling consists of three main phases, including garbage classification and washing the glass
, melting them, delivery and packaging.
In the first stage, starting with glass
bottles
are thrown into the recycle bin by individuals. The bottles
are transferred to the treatment plant where the glass
bottles
before washing the stains in a sterilizing machine which have clean water and modern technology.
The second stage begins with crushing the glass
bottles
with the heavy compression of equipment. Then
the factory has to melt all of them at high degrees that help the glass
from a solid state to a liquid state before taking on the new shape of glass
by using a moulding machine.
In the last
steps, the glass
is then
packed and transported to all of the supermarkets by trucks.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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