The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts display the percentages and numbers of males and females working in The UK in the years 1988 and 2012.

Overall

, the number of full-time

men

had the highest percentage in both years 1988 and 2012

while

men

part-time had the least.

Women

par-time

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part-time

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had

the

Correct article usage

apply

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second place in 1988 and slightly went down in 2012,

furthermore

, the

amount

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number

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women

working full-time abruptly increased in 2012 respect with

1988

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to 1988

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. In 1988 nearly half of the

workers

were

men

full-time with 53% and 12539

workers

being the highest proportion.

Women

working full-time started with 4482

workers

however

, in 2012

this

number significantly went up reaching 7696 people and nearly a quarter of the proportion. The proportion of

women

working

par-time

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part-time

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had second place in 1988 with 5268

workers

and 22% and

men

part-time had the

least

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lowest

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number and the

least

Correct word choice

lowest

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percentage 1550 and 6% respectively. These numbers remain in 2012 with no significant changes.

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