The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts display the percentages and numbers of males and females working in The UK in the years 1988 and 2012.
Overall
, the number of full-time men
had the highest percentage in both years 1988 and 2012 while
men
part-time had the least. Women
par-time
had Correct your spelling
part-time
the
second place in 1988 and slightly went down in 2012, Correct article usage
apply
furthermore
, the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
women
working full-time abruptly increased in 2012 respect with 1988
.
In 1988 nearly half of the Change preposition
to 1988
workers
were men
full-time with 53% and 12539 workers
being the highest proportion. Women
working full-time started with 4482 workers
, however
, in 2012 this
number significantly went up reaching 7696 people and nearly a quarter of the proportion.
The proportion of women
working par-time
had second place in 1988 with 5268 Correct your spelling
part-time
workers
and 22% and men
part-time had the least
number and the Correct word choice
lowest
least
percentage 1550 and 6% respectively. These numbers remain in 2012 with no significant changes.Correct word choice
lowest
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