The three pie charts show the proportion of four kinds of vehicles used in the UK in 1965, 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts below
illustrates
the percentage of 4 kinds of Change the verb form
illustrate
cars
in British in the years of 1965, 1985 and 2005. It's obvious that most citizens in UK
liked private Correct article usage
the UK
cars
, whereas
the proportion of recreational vehicles
was the lowest. Except
personal Add the preposition
Except for
cars
, other cars
all showed a decreasing trend during those years.
In 1965, British people who used their own cars
occupied the largest ratio, with the
percentage of 40%, which was evidently higher than that of public Correct article usage
a
vehicles
(25%). Meanwhile, lorries and other commercical
Correct your spelling
commercial
vehicles
took up 20% of the quantity, compared with 15% for recreational cars
, which was the lowest. When it comes to 1985, the proportion of personal vehicles
saw an
significant upward and reached Change the article
a
at
55%, which was more than two times Change preposition
apply
of
that of public transport and Change preposition
apply
commercical
Correct your spelling
commercial
cars
(both 20%). In addition
, the percentage of cars
for entertainment decreased quickly and fell to only 5%.
When time
Add an article
the time
comes
to 2005, Wrong verb form
came
vehicles
for personal uses
continued to Fix the agreement mistake
use
went
up and Change the verb
go
finally
reached 60%, which was the highest, which was almost 3 times of public transport(22%). On the other hand
, the proportion of lorries and other commercical
Correct your spelling
commercial
cars
dropped to 10%, which was merely half of that in 1985, while
entertainment vehicles
grew up to 8%, which was still the lowest one.Submitted by Phigros666 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars, vehicles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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