The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The chart illustrates the amount of 3

diffrent

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different

kinds of fast

food

getting consumed in Britain from 1970 up

untill

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until

1990. A close look at the chart

reavels

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reveals

revels

that

pizza

was the most popular

food

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the

begging

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beginning

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of the 70s,

however

, it did not maintain the lead as its' popularity began to decline. The decline was slow but steady and its'

demand

underwent heavy changes to now it is the least

favored

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favoured

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fast

food

. Hamburger,

on the other hand

, had humble beginnings started as the least liked fast

food

and

reamined

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remained

unchanged in that regard through

70s

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the 70s

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but in the

mid

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mid-80s

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80s

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80s,

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it saw a sharp incline in

demand

to now being more sought after than

pizza

with just shy of 300 grams of it in fast foods in 1990. In the

beginnings

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fish and chips

was

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were

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the second most popular fast

food

just before

pizza

however

, the

demand

for it only had risen from 1970.The chart shows that fish and chips grow exponentially a grow that did not slow down and took the lead as the most

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in-demand

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demand

fast

food

with over 500 grams of it in

food

which has created a significant gap to the second place.

Overall

, we can see a

grow

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growth

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among

hamnurger

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hamburger

hamburgers

and fish and chips

pizza

, though, lost

its'

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its

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position as the most

favored

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favoured

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fast

food

in the UK.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, pizza, demand with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slow" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

227 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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