The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The chart illustrates the amount of 3
diffrent
kinds of fast Correct your spelling
different
food
getting consumed in Britain from 1970 up untill
1990.
A close look at the chart Correct your spelling
until
reavels
that Correct your spelling
reveals
revels
pizza
was the most popular food
in
the Change preposition
at
begging
of the 70s, Correct your spelling
beginning
however
, it did not maintain the lead as its' popularity began to decline. The decline was slow but steady and its' demand
underwent heavy changes to now it is the least favored
fast Change the spelling
favoured
food
.
Hamburger, on the other hand
, had humble beginnings started as the least liked fast food
and reamined
unchanged in that regard through Correct your spelling
remained
70s
but in the Change the article
the 70s
mid
Add a hyphen
mid-80s
80s
it saw a sharp incline in Add a comma
80s,
demand
to now being more sought after than pizza
with just shy of 300 grams of it in fast foods in 1990.
In the beginnings
fish and chips Fix the agreement mistake
beginning
was
the second most popular fast Change the verb form
were
food
just before pizza
, however
, the demand
for it only had risen from 1970.The chart shows that fish and chips grow exponentially a grow that did not slow down and took the lead as the most in
Add a hyphen
in-demand
demand
fast food
with over 500 grams of it in food
which has created a significant gap to the second place.
Overall
, we can see a grow
among Replace the word
growth
hamnurger
and fish and chips Correct your spelling
hamburger
hamburgers
pizza
, though, lost its'
position as the most Correct your spelling
its
favored
fast Change the spelling
favoured
food
in the UK.Submitted by parsaj1381 on
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