The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the
number
of visits
made by people
across six age
groups to hospital emergency
care
departments in Northern Ireland in December
2016 and 2017.
It is evident that there was a slight increase in the rate of hospital emergency
care
visits
across all six age
categories from December
2016 to December
2017. In both months, elderly people
and young children accounted for the highest number
of visits
to hospital emergency
care
departments.
In December
2016 and 2017, adults over 75 years old had the highest number
of hospital emergency
visits
, with roughly 65 attendances
per 1,000 people
in 2016 and 70 attendances
per 1,000 in 2017. Following
this
group were children under 5 years of age
, with approximately 52 attendances
per 1,000 in December
2016 and 54 attendances
per 1,000 in 2017.
The remaining age
groups—5 to 15, 16 to 44, 45 to 64, and 65 to 74—made fewer trips to hospital emergency
care
departments, with attendances
all under 40 per 1,000 people
in both December
2016 and 2017. Among these, individuals aged 5 to 15 years old had the lowest number
of visits
, with just over 20 per 1,000 in both months.Submitted by 645119931 on
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