The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given chart provides information about the ratio of male and female
drivers
who successfully completed their driving test from 1980 to 2010.
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Overall
, it is clearly seen that women were more competent in order to accomplish driving tests over a 3-decade time period.
Women Linking Words
drivers
proved their superiority since the beginning of the period. In the year 1980, just under half of female Use synonyms
drivers
obtained their driving licence Use synonyms
while
around 30% of males could do the same. The success of women had continued increasingly by 2000 and saw a peak of more than 2 in 3 of total female Linking Words
drivers
. In the next ten years, Use synonyms
figure
decreased and saw slightly under 65%.
When it comes to men, their performance had Add an article
the figure
also
increased by 2010. As of the beginning, accomplished male Linking Words
drivers
increased their proportions in 20 years and reached the peak of nearly half of their number. Use synonyms
Finally
, the figure stayed still throughout the next 5 years.Linking Words
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