The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or collage lecturer.
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The given two graphs illustrate information about the average working
hours
for eight particular occupations, and the percentage of each job that has illness related to pressure.
Overall
, what stands out from the graphs is that,
there seems to be no correlation between the number of working Remove the comma
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hours
and the amount of pressure.
For the first graph, we can find that there is a
biggest gap between businessmen and lecturers, businessmen have the longest average working Change the article
the
hours
of 70 hours
,
and is almost three times greater than that of the lecturers, which is the lowest (25 Remove the comma
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hours
only). Moreover
, writers, doctors and movie producers’ figures are relatively higher, with around 50 hours
. However
, the rest of the occupations’ figures are lower, around 40 hours
only.
When it comes to the second chart, The biggest one is found in lecturers, with 25%, revealing that this
profession has the largest level of stress, while
the close following can be found in movie producers and doctors, with around 20%. However
, the rest of the jobs only have figures around 10%. Besides
that, an abnormal phenomenon is that, although
the programmers seem to have to deal with a lot of problems and work for 40 hours
per week, they have less pressure.Submitted by 2575444164 on
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