, The charts below show the proportion of people’s total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1958 and in 2008.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of people's money that they spent on various commodities and services in a European country in 1958 and
in
2008
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apply
Overall
, in 1958 humans preferred to spend their budget mostly to
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on
meal
, housing and clothing. Fix the agreement mistake
meals
However
, in 2008 adults payed
their Correct your spelling
paid
bill
for housing, Fix the agreement mistake
bills
then
for traveling
and for different luxury goods (both 17%).
The most noticeable thing in Change the spelling
travelling
first
chart is that many adults used 72% of the whole budget Change the article
the first
to
necessary staff Change preposition
for
such
as food, houses
and clothes. Wrong verb form
housing
Other part
of Change the wording
Another part
Other parts
bill
, nearly Add an article
the bill
third
% of Correct article usage
a third
money
they Add an article
the money
splended
Correct your spelling
spend
to
entertainment, some luxury things and Change preposition
on
traveling
.
Regarding Change the spelling
travelling
to
sales in 2008, the biggest percentage of Remove the preposition
apply
pie
went to housing, 32% respectively. Correct article usage
the pie
On
the second place, Change preposition
In
traveling
and luxuries were very popular for humans, Change the spelling
travelling
Correct article usage
a totally
totally
Replace the word
total
34
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of 34
percentages
. To compare products in luxury categories, Replace the word
per cent
itwas
most unpopular for humans in 1958.Correct your spelling
it was
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