The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar
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shows the Correct your spelling
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age
data of girls in Australia when they gave birth to their first
child in three different years
(1966, 1986, and 2006). From an overall
perspective, it can be seen that there was Correct article usage
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changes
trend for the biggest proportion of the Fix the agreement mistake
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age
group
, while
the older adults (over 40) remained unchanged as the lowest percentage among others.
Examining the details, the percentage of women giving birth to their first
child in 1966 accounted for the productive age
, between 19 to 24 years
, as the first
ranked with more than 60 per cent
. Furthermore
, there were only less than 40% for both in 25-30 years
and under 19. In addition
, the thirties ranked as the fourth and fifth positions followed by the elderly, being the least age
group
who experienced their pregnancy for the first
time.
Moving on to the next 20 years
, adults who were in
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years
old recorded
as the highest number with exactly a half proportion. Add a missing verb
were recorded
However
, the 19 to 24 years
group
has dropped to roughly 40%. The other categories were in the same condition as the previous years
. Lastly
, in 2006, around 47 per cent
of women borned
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born
first
baby and the 25-30 group
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with almost Correct your spelling
behind
fourty
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forty
four
cent
. There were
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a slightly
slightly increased
for the Replace the word
slight increase
age
of 34-39 from under 20 to 30 per cent
.
Lastly
, the 19-24 reached below 30 per cent
and over 40 still at the least amount of people who giving birth their first
child.Submitted by as on
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