The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates the numeral information about the various activities among the
people
located in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 to 2020.
Overall
, it is evident from the graph that among these 5 activities, the majority of the people
participated in film club activity
. however
, the musical performances had a minority participation among the others from 2005 to 2020.
The Community lost their interest in Amateur
dramatics
activity
while
their interest in table tennis drastically increased at the end
of this
period. Initially
, participants were more willing in amateur
dramatics
. this
number increased from 24 to 29 during
2000 to 2005 Change preposition
from
Nonetheless
, this
chiffre diminished sharply in 2005 and arrived at less than 10 people
in 2020. In contrast
for table tennis, this
graph changed differently. From 2000 to 2010 the amount of society who decided to allocate their time to this
activity
increased slightly from 18 to 20 whereas
this
number surged substantially and arrived at 52 participants from 2010 to 2020 close to the Film club activity
second place
. The digit of Martial arts fluctuated over these 20 years and stayed at 37 at the end
of this
period which achieved third place
in this
figure. For the musical performances and the Amateur
dramatics
, they stayed fourth and fifth place
respectively with number of 18 and 5 participants.
In conclusion, despite the fact that people
lost their own enthusiasm for Amateur
dramatics
, the community had a noticeable interest in Film club activity
during this
time when table tennis found its own place
in society.Submitted by nasiri.behnam1994 on
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