The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The pie charts show some data about

world

Correct article usage

the world

show examples

population divided by nations and their spending which included five categories.

Overall

Linking Words

, the

leader

Replace the word

leading

show examples

nation between people is Asia and

then

Linking Words

Americans

Replace the word

America

show examples

and Europe humans, these categories had the same numbers. For paying bills, people prefer to

payed

Wrong verb form

pay

show examples

their salaries for basic needs and almost half of their budget to other personal categories. The most noticeable trend

that

Add a missing verb

is that

show examples

more than half of humans are Asians, 57

percentages

Replace the word

per cent

show examples

. In the second place,

European

Fix the agreement mistake

Europeans

show examples

and Americans got 14 percentages for both of them. African people

achieve

Verb problem

comprise

show examples

only 10% of

Add an article

the world

show examples

world

Change noun form

world's

show examples

population.

Finally

Linking Words

, other humans population has

very

Add an article

a very

show examples

small minority. Regarding

Remove the preposition

apply

show examples

money spending, adults used the majority of their welfare for human's essential needs,

for example

Linking Words

, for food, housing,

transports

Fix the agreement mistake

transport

show examples

and clothing, 60% respectively.

olqa.zvereva01Sat Aug 17 2024

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.

▼

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

▼

Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

▼

Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

▼

4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

130 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6.5
band
Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?
In this present world, the usage of technology is constantly on the rise. Even classrooms are among the many places that enjoy the usage and benefits of technology. It is disagreed that classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Analysing the incapability of disciplining classroom students with technology, as well as the limitation in the learning process of students taught with technology will prove this.
7
band
•Nowadays, it is getting difficult for people to enjoy their lives in cities. Why do you think this is? What can the government do to make life in cities more enjoyable?
•In modern days, it is becoming harder to have fun for communities in their lives in urban places. The problem is boring activities and dirty air in most of the cities, however the solution is easier, than people might think.
7.5
band
Some university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some university students are interested in learning about various subjects in addition to their primary subjects, whereas others think it is crucial to focus on their major subjects and allocate their time and attention in order to achieve their degree. In my opinion, learning about different subjects may lead to increased job opportunities and broaden their knowledge. To begin with, increasing job opportunities play a huge role in our society nowadays. Studying further topics can broaden their horizons, also possibly increasing their knowledge and learning about what people faced previously. All these factors lead to overcoming future mistakes and challenges which impact positively on their psychological well-being and mental health. For example, research has been conducted by Oxford University. If individuals learn about past challenging situations, these will influence significantly the progression of a human being. Focusing solely on main disciplines, and concentrating all effo...
8
band
In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
There has been a long debate about the long-term impact of the increased ageing population. From my point of view, the negative effect of this trend exceeds its positive effect.
6.5
band
Directors and managers are mostly older people. Some people believe young people will become better leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that young people will become better leaders,whilst directors and managers in general are older people. I partly agree with this statement that young people should be in the first place.

The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

•Nowadays, it is getting difficult for people to enjoy their lives in cities. Why do you think this is? What can the government do to make life in cities more enjoyable?

Some university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.

Directors and managers are mostly older people. Some people believe young people will become better leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?