You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below give information about world spending and population. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts show some data about
world
population divided by nations and their spending which included five categories.
Correct article usage
the world
Overall
, the leader
nation between people is Asia and Replace the word
leading
then
Americans
and Europe humans, these categories had the same numbers. For paying bills, people prefer to Replace the word
America
payed
their salaries for basic needs and almost half of their budget to other personal categories.
The most noticeable trend Wrong verb form
pay
that
more than half of humans are Asians, 57 Add a missing verb
is that
percentages
. In the second place, Replace the word
per cent
European
and Americans got 14 percentages for both of them. African people Fix the agreement mistake
Europeans
achieve
only 10% of Verb problem
comprise
Add an article
the world
world
population. Change noun form
world's
Finally
, other humans population has very
small minority.
Regarding Add an article
a very
to
money spending, adults used the majority of their welfare for human's essential needs, Remove the preposition
apply
for example
, for food, housing, transports
and clothing, 60% respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
transport
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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