The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart depicts the difference between the average weekly spending of families in one country in 1968 and in 2018.
Overall
, in both centuries families almost half of their income was spent to
"Food, housing and clothing" . Change preposition
on
However
it can be seen that "food" was a leader in Add a comma
However,
the
consumption but it Correct article usage
apply
fall
dramatically Wrong verb form
fell
for
18% Change preposition
by
also
lost 1st place in the diagram and Correct word choice
and also
staying
under "housing" and "leisure".
As Wrong verb form
stayed
it
can be seen, "food" enormously Correct pronoun usage
apply
fall
from just over a third of all weekly income to 17% Wrong verb form
fell
while
"housing" rised
to 19% from 10% which Correct your spelling
rose
show
that they are almost doubled. Correct subject-verb agreement
shows
Additionally
, "clothing" which had a similar percentages
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a similar percentage
similar percentages
with
"housing" Change preposition
to
are
halved in 50 years. Wrong verb form
was
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proper attention to "leisure". It increased Remove the article
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"fuel and power", Correct article usage
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goods" decreased for a small minority and spending for "transport" doubled Correct word choice
and "personal
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"household goods" remained stable.Submitted by talgattan4ez on
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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