The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the estimated literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and  reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The Graph displays the percentage of
literacy
between males and females in the five continents in the years 2000 and 2004.
Overall
, in the whole world, people can read and write and with a significant difference between men and women. Europe is the region with the highest rate of
literacy
,
whereas
, Africa had the lowest. The differences between Oceania and the Americas were almost the same as between genders. Europe has been the continent with the highest rates of
literacy
with a total of just below 99 %, Africa and Asia had the lowest with 62.5 and just below 80% respectively. The rates of the Americas and Oceania were nearly 94% in both regions. The comparison between the sexes was significant in Africa and Asia with a difference between genders of nearly 20% and 15% respectively. The other 3 regions have had a proportion of
literacy
between men and women nearly 100% with no significant differences among genders.
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