The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015.

Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.
The pie chart given compares how the percentage of car manufacturing varied across 7 different countries in 2015.
Overall
, if we take the 7 elements in combination, it is evident that Greater China took up the most, followed closely by Europe. Meanwhile, the Middle East and Africa made up the least. Greater China made up more than one-fourth of the chart with 26%, followed by Europe with only a 1% gap, which means
this
region is standing second with 25% of vehicle production during the time period mentioned. Another highlight is North America with nearly one-fifth of the chart. Close to that number are Japan and Korea with 16% of car production in 2015, equivalent to a 3% gap with North America,
This
leaves South Asia, South America and Middle East and Africa with 8%, 4% and 2% respectively. Even the sum of these three regions, which is 14%, is only approximately one-half of the proportion of the country with the most productive car manufacturing.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • car ownership
  • make
  • country
  • comparison
  • distribution
  • vehicle preferences
  • automotive market
  • popular brands
  • market share
  • dominant
  • proportion
  • trend
  • variation
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