The graph and the chart below show the number of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line diagram delineates the total
number
of undergraduates taking different courses in a particular university Use synonyms
while
the bar graph reveals the gender preference of given choices in 2012.
Generally, there were six majors as social Linking Words
sciences
led the chart with the most participants Use synonyms
whereas
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agriculture
accounted for the least. Based on sexes, female Use synonyms
students
enrolled more Use synonyms
into
social Change preposition
on
sciences
, health, and humanities Use synonyms
while
male counterparts took up engineering and mathematical science. Linking Words
Agriculture
had the same Use synonyms
number
for both genders.
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Firstly
social Linking Words
sciences
comprised of mostly females, reaching 4,000 numerally Use synonyms
while
males were 1000 Linking Words
students
behind. Use synonyms
Next,
the health department exhibited the same tendency with over 1500 Linking Words
students
being women and less than 1000 Use synonyms
students
being men. The same applied to humanities, where the majority of attendees were females, with nearly the same amount yet males being slightly higher at the 1,000 mark.
For Engineering, the male Use synonyms
number
was more than double that of its counterparts with more than 2,000 Use synonyms
students
taking the course. Moving onto mathematical science, it experienced a familiar trend with fewer Use synonyms
students
in total, 1,500 for males and around 750 for females respectively. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
agriculture
attracted the least Use synonyms
students
but it had an equal Use synonyms
number
of both genders attending classes at being 200 approximately.
For the total Use synonyms
number
of undergraduates, the first came social Use synonyms
sciences
with 7,000 Use synonyms
then
Engineering with less than half of the aforementioned subject. Next was health and humanities just reached over 2,000. Science and math took up around 2,000 marks Linking Words
whereas
only 400 Linking Words
students
took up Use synonyms
agriculture
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