The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 1
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The given chart illustrates the worth of a certain state's exports in multiple aspects in 2015 and 2016. The table below displays the changes
of
rates of manufactured Change preposition
in
products
to sell
to other countries from 2015 to 2016.
Change the verb form
sold
Overall
, all of the shown categories experienced a rise in their ratings, besides
gems and jewellery. Moreover
, while
most of the aspects' percentages changed significantly, agricultural products
were exported with a minor increase.
As we can see from the chart, petroleum products
earned more than 70 billion
dollars in
each year. Engineered goods made under 70 Change preposition
apply
billion
in 2015 but also
upgraded up to that number in the next year. Gems and jewellery acquired approximately 50 billion
in both years and two
remaining categories stood at a rate of 40 Correct article usage
the two
billion
dollars.
Speaking about table
, petrochemical exports Correct article usage
the table
were
increased by 3%. Tools for engineers’ rate made good progress by 8.5%. Unnecessary verb
apply
While
,
Remove the comma
apply
bijouterie
Correct article usage
the bijouterie
products
percentage actually lowered by about 5%. Agricultural products
were sold more with a slight growth of less than 1%. However
, textile products’
exports skyrocketed by 15%.Change noun form
products
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