The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 3
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The bar chart provided reveals the exports’ worth of a significant government in different classifications. The given table demonstrates the change in percentage in each
exports’
classification in 2016 contrasted with 2015.
Change noun form
exports
Overall
, the value of exports in each categories
except “Gems and jewellery” increased in one year. The amount of export Change to a singular noun
category
earnings
from”Petroleum
products” category is higher than Correct article usage
from the”Petroleum
another
categories’ Correct quantifier usage
other
earnings
, moreover
the amount of Add a comma
moreover,
earnings
from exported textiles is the smallest.
First of all, the government earned 60billion
Correct your spelling
60 billion
dollars
in 2015 and about 65billions
in 2016. Correct your spelling
65 billion
Moreover
, a
country obtained 55.000 million US Correct article usage
the
dollars
in 2015 and 5 billions
more in 2016. Change to singular
billion
However
, only acquirement from exported gems and jewellery has difference
. Add an article
a difference
the difference
A
government received Correct article usage
The
45billions
in 2015 and Correct your spelling
45 billion
40billions
in 2016. Correct your spelling
40 billion
Earning
from agricultural products composed Correct your spelling
Earnings
30billions
in 2015 and approximately Correct your spelling
30 billion dollars
32billion
Correct your spelling
32 billion
dollars
in 2016 meanwhile, they received 25billions
in 2015 and about Correct your spelling
25 billion dollars
30billion
Correct your spelling
30 billion
dollars
in 2016.
In the next,
earnings
from products made from petroleum increased to 3%. Acquirement from engineering tools increased to 8,5% meanwhile, assets from gems decreased to 5,18%. Earning
from agricultural products grew only to 0,81% and Correct your spelling
Earnings
earnings
from textiles raised
to 15,24%.Verb problem
rose
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