The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps demonstrate the changes that will happen to Norbiton
town
in the future.
Overall
, the town
will change from an industrial area to a residential land with the addition of a number of civilian amenities and new additional roads.
In the future, there will be seven residential blocks instead
of eight factories. In the north of the town
, a new road will be constructed passing the road through a bridge to connect the northern housing area with the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
town
.
A new school will be built in the western part of the Norbiton land, and a new playground will be developed near it. Also
, a medical centre and shops will be constructed in the south-west and south-east of the big roundabout respectively. There will be some changes to the southern road by adding a small roundabout to make it easy for cars to enter the center
of the Change the spelling
centre
town
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