you have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course you know find that you can not continue the course. write the letter to the course tutor. in your letter : describe your situation - explain why you cannot continueat this time -say what action you would like to do.
Dear sir
Iam
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I am
sara
pourjanaki , currently I have taken Change the capitalization
Sara
this
marketing course
so I am writing this
letter to inform you unfortunately
I can not continue my Add the comma(s)
, unfortunately,
course
due to
I have found a Change preposition
apply
full time
job. I need money and I should earn enough income to get through my financial issues.Add a hyphen
full-time
this
course
needs many concentrations that because of my situation
I Add a comma
situation,
canInot
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cannot
focuse
on.I would like to take Correct your spelling
focus
focuses
focused
this
usefull
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useful
course
at another time when I have been abled
to come over my money problem. I would obliged if you could help me to Replace the word
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refoun
my money .
sincerely yours
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refund
refound
sara
pourjanakiChange the capitalization
Sara
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coherence cohesion
Improve sentence structure and grammar to enhance clarity. For example, break down long sentences and correct grammatical errors.
task achievement
Try to be more specific with your reasons and proposed solutions; it would make the letter more compelling and clear.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and respectful, which is suitable for the context.
coherence cohesion
You have included a greeting and a closing, which makes the letter more coherent and professional.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.