The table below shows the percentage of members of parliament who were women in five regions, compared to the percentage of worlwide, in 1990, 1997 and 2005.

The table below shows the percentage of members of parliament who were women in five regions, compared to the percentage of worlwide, in 1990, 1997 and 2005.
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who are working at the parliament in 5 different
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Europe regions
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2000 to 2015. The unit given is percentages.
Overall
, all five states had shown a
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of
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proportion
at the end
of the year in comparison to the initial year, especially, in the UK. Looking at the top three higher female
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, in 2000, Germany stood at 33% and had the most figures than other places before increasing steadily and
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a close
second,
36% in 2012. As for
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Italy, they started at just above a quarter
then
rose to less than
two fifths
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which held at the top one biggest rates in the ended year. France placed at
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third place with a quarter in 2000 before reaching
at
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a peak point at just below a third after 12 years. Regarding the UK and Belgium, both have
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digit in 2012, 23% each.
However
, British
famale
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of parliaments had the most sharp
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trend over time
while
Belgium had a
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after a rise in 2004.
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