The table below shows the percentage of members of parliament who were women in five regions, compared to the percentage of worlwide, in 1990, 1997 and 2005.
The line graph illustrates the data of
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women
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in
2000 to 2015. The unit given is percentages.
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Overall
, all five states had shown a significantly risen
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at the end
of the year in comparison to the initial year, especially, in the UK.
Looking at the top three higher female congress
, in 2000, Germany stood at 33% and had the most figures than other places before increasing steadily and Change to a plural noun
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falling
second,
36% in 2012. As for the
Italy, they started at just above a quarter Correct article usage
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then
rose to less than two fifths
which held at the top one biggest rates in the ended year. France placed at Add a hyphen
two-fifths
the
third place with a quarter in 2000 before reaching Correct article usage
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at
a peak point at just below a third after 12 years.
Regarding the UK and Belgium, both have Change preposition
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same
digit in 2012, 23% each. Change the article
the same
However
, British famale
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while
Belgium had a dropped
after a rise in 2004.Replace the word
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