The bar chart gives data about the percentage of individuals who ate specific potrion of herbals on a single day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.

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the UK population which women, men and children taking herbals daily from 2001 to 2008.

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, British women had a

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higher proportion of eating

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medicine habits in comparison to kids where the lowest intake over the recorded year. Looking at the adults, in 2001, females

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lead with more than a fifth before reaching a peak point of just above a third in 2006,

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to 30% in 2008. As for males, in the initial year, it has a hovering trend for three years with slightly less than a fifth before climbing back to more than a quarter over

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. Regarding younger generations, they dislike the taste of herbs which contributes to the

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supplements over the mentioned periods where 13% in 2001 and ended at twice the number from the previous digit, 22% per day.