The bar chart gives data about the percentage of individuals who ate specific potrion of herbals on a single day in the UK between 2001 and 2008.
The bar chart illustrates the information
of
the UK population which women, men and children taking herbals daily from 2001 to 2008.
Change preposition
on
Overall
, British women had a significant
higher proportion of eating Change the adjective
significantly
tradition
medicine habits in comparison to kids where the lowest intake over the recorded year.
Looking at the adults, in 2001, females Replace the word
traditional
taking
Wrong verb form
took
a
lead with more than a fifth before reaching a peak point of just above a third in 2006, Correct article usage
the
then
drop
to 30% in 2008. As for males, in the initial year, it has a hovering trend for three years with slightly less than a fifth before climbing back to more than a quarter over Wrong verb form
dropped
times
.
Regarding younger generations, they dislike the taste of herbs which contributes to the Fix the agreement mistake
time
least
intake of Correct word choice
lowest
such
supplements over the mentioned periods where 13% in 2001 and ended at twice the number from the previous digit, 22% per day.Submitted by tifjong on
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