The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 4
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The given chart demonstrates
country’s
Correct article usage
the country’s
export
value
in different categories between 2015 and 2016 in percents.
Overall
, the export
earnings have 5 various product categories, which are petroleum products
, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural products
and textiles.
It is seen that over a year the change in value
of gems and jewellery class decreased, while
others increased.
Firstly
, there is a 3% increase in earnings of petroleum products
export
, making it the most profitable category with over than
60 Change preposition
apply
billion
dollars
in both years. Then
by the amount of money comes the engineered goods that gained 8,5
% increase. Correct article usage
an 8,5
As a result
in 2016
the Add a comma
2016,
value
rate is
70 Wrong verb form
was
billion
dollars
.
The export
categories of gems and jewelry
were distinguished on a smaller scale, Change the spelling
jewellery
cause
it’s the only one that had a 5,18% decrease Correct word choice
because
comparing
with Change the form of the verb
compared
a
previous year. The increase of agricultural Correct article usage
the
products
value
can be considered as negligible because it’s less than 1% (0,81), so the earnings stayed at the worth of 40 billion
dollars
. The same monetary value
is typical for textiles in 2016. Year
before that, the worth was slightly more than 30 Add an article
The year
A year
billion
dollars
, but this
category is equal to the last
one cause
it has the biggest percentage change in Correct word choice
because
value
(15,24%).Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words export, value, products, billion, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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