WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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This
chart demonstrates the percentage
of workers
in 1980 and 2010 among three sectors across four countries
.it is clear from the charts that industry
workers
had the highest percentage
almost in all four countries
in 1980 and 2010.
According to
what is shown in 1980 the percentage
of workers
in all the three sectors is almost the same in the four countries
. however
, China has a different percentage
distribution agriculture presenting 70% of workers
. On the other hand
, Germany has almost 5 % of agricultural workers
. Furthermore
, in 2010 there was an increase in industry
workers
in Germany, the USA, and Japan. Although
China had a decrease in all the three sectors. and Germany still has the highest number of industry
workers
.
To sum up
, we could say that industry
worker is the future and will continue to increase. agriculture describes the practice of growing crops or raising animals. In other words
, not all these countries
have an agricultural environment.Submitted by sarahfahadliv on
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