Some people believe that children should spend all of their fee time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Nowadays, many agree with the fact that the younger generations should devote as much of their

time

to their relatives.

While

some argue that

this

can be

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beneficial

, others find it to have a negative effect on a

child

's well-being. The purpose of

this

essay is to provide arguments and illustrate why I personally believe, that children should not spend all their leisure

time

surrounded only by close family

members

. On the one hand, many believe, that a young mind requires the guidance and protection of an adult at all times during the day. By making children spend all of their free

time

in a familiar environment, parents are able to control and filter what their

child

gets exposed to and

therefore

, prevent them from learning or witnessing life-threatening or

innapropriate

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inappropriate

situations.

Additionally

,

this

gives them a

sence

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sense

of control and safety,

for example

, by knowing that their

child

is in their close proximity and not engaging in potentially dangerous activities.

While

this

can be

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beneficial

for a guardian, it can lead to many negative effects on a

child

's development.

On the other hand

, by taking a

child

's freedom away, in

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sense

of only allowing them to interact with family

members

, it can gradually create many issues in later life. To provide an example, when a kid is ready to enter a more social environment,

such

as going to school or a playground, to be able to make friends and form connections, a certain set of skills is necessary.

Moreover

, by depriving them of interactions with strangers at an early stage of life, they are more prone to having problems with fitting in among a group of new people.

Furthermore

, I personally believe, that little kids should have adequate exposure to various social circles

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in their early years, as

this

leads to a more confident approach to many important future situations.

Finally

, by allowing them to spend their leisure

time

with friends and not only family

members

, a

child

gets a "break"

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the repetitive home activities and has a chance to observe life

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different way,

therefore

, leading to the gain

knowledge

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and experience. In conclusion,

while

there are many benefits to interacting with family

members

, I strongly believe that a

child

should not fully devote their free

time

only to them, rather they should be given the freedom to explore other social circles and make valuable connections and experiences.