Some people believe that children should spend all of their fee time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments both sides, and say which side you personally support.

Nowadays, many agree with the fact that the younger generations should devote as much of their

time

Use synonyms

to their relatives.

While

Linking Words

some argue that

this

Linking Words

can be

benefitial

Correct your spelling

beneficial

, others find it to have a negative effect on a

child

Use synonyms

's well-being. The purpose of

this

Linking Words

essay is to provide arguments and illustrate why I personally believe, that children should not spend all their leisure

time

Use synonyms

surrounded only by close family

members

Use synonyms

. On the one hand, many believe, that a young mind requires the guidance and protection of an adult at all times during the day. By making children spend all of their free

time

Use synonyms

in a familiar environment, parents are able to control and filter what their

child

Use synonyms

gets exposed to and

therefore

Linking Words

, prevent them from learning or witnessing life-threatening or

innapropriate

Correct your spelling

inappropriate

situations.

Additionally

Linking Words

,

this

Linking Words

gives them a

sence

Correct your spelling

sense

of control and safety,

for example

Linking Words

, by knowing that their

child

Use synonyms

is in their close proximity and not engaging in potentially dangerous activities.

While

Linking Words

this

Linking Words

can be

benefitial

Correct your spelling

beneficial

for a guardian, it can lead to many negative effects on a

child

Use synonyms

's development.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, by taking a

child

Use synonyms

's freedom away, in

a

Correct article usage

the

show examples

sence

Correct your spelling

sense

of only allowing them to interact with family

members

Use synonyms

, it can gradually create many issues in later life. To provide an example, when a kid is ready to enter a more social environment,

such

Linking Words

as going to school or a playground, to be able to make friends and form connections, a certain set of skills is necessary.

Moreover

Linking Words

, by depriving them of interactions with strangers at an early stage of life, they are more prone to having problems with fitting in among a group of new people.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, I personally believe, that little kids should have adequate exposure to various social circles

especially

Add the comma(s)

, especially

show examples

in their early years, as

this

Linking Words

leads to a more confident approach to many important future situations.

Finally

Linking Words

, by allowing them to spend their leisure

time

Use synonyms

with friends and not only family

members

Use synonyms

, a

child

Use synonyms

gets a "break"

form

Correct your spelling

from

show examples

the repetitive home activities and has a chance to observe life

ina

Correct your spelling

in a

show examples

different way,

therefore

Linking Words

, leading to the gain

knowledge

Change preposition

of knowledge

show examples

and experience. In conclusion,

while

Linking Words

there are many benefits to interacting with family

members

Use synonyms

, I strongly believe that a

child

Use synonyms

should not fully devote their free

time

Use synonyms

only to them, rather they should be given the freedom to explore other social circles and make valuable connections and experiences.