The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows the total percentage of
workers
in three
sectors across four
countries
during the period 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, the bar chart shows the total percentage of workers
in three
sectors during the period 1980 and 2010 across four
countries
. The three
sectors are Agriculture
, Industry and Services and the four
countries
are Germany, the USA, Japan and China
.
During, the 1980s the agriculture
sector
has less than 10 per cent
in the three
countries
Germany, the USA and Japan, but China
has more than 60 per cent
in the agriculture
sector
. In the Industry sector
, all four
countries
maintain above 40 per cent
and Germany has the lead of 60 per cent
and in the final Service sector
has more than 45 per cent
in the other three
countries
except Japan has less than 45 per cent
and the exact percentage of workers
is 39.
During 2010, the number of workers
in agriculture
gradually reduced in the other three
countries
by less than 5 to 10 per cent
and China
still maintains 50 per cent
in this
sector
. In the industrial sector
Add a comma
sector,
China
have 40 per cent
only but the other three
countries
maintain above 60 to 85 per cent
gradually. In the service sector
, all four
countries
maintain below 40 to 20 per cent
of workers
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