You have recently applied for a course at the college and have been accepted. However you cannot join the course due to some reasons. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter, •which course you have applied for •why you cannot join the course •ask about the possibility of the course in the future
Dear Sir or Madam,
Recently I have applied for a
course
at the college and have been received. But I might not be able to participate in the course
due to
some factors. That's why, I am writing to ask you organize
Fix the infinitive
to organize
for
another Change preposition
apply
course
later
Last
week I saw your advertisement about cooking
Correct article usage
a cooking
course
on the bulletin board at the college. I really have an affinity for cooking and I am going to enhance my skills to
cooking. Change preposition
in
Hence
, I applied for this
course
.
However
, I cannot take part in the course
this
is because,
I am going to leave with my family to Remove the comma
apply
foreign
country for a month. Add an article
a foreign
Due to
, my father wants to move his business to another country for a month.
I am writing to request
you if you will organize another Verb problem
ask
course
or not. If you make it, I would be a
grateful.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
LucyChange the article
apply
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task achievement
Ensure clarity and more details in explaining why you cannot join the course, as it helps the reader fully understand your situation.
coherence cohesion
Work on improving the logical flow between paragraphs, making sure each paragraph transitions smoothly into the next.
coherence cohesion
Use a more formal structure when requesting the future availability of the course. For instance, 'I would like to inquire about the possibility of the course being offered at a later date.'
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and courteous, which sets a positive tone for the letter.
task achievement
The writing tone is suitable for a formal letter and maintains a respectful tone throughout.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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