The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over berween 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the number of elderly people aged 65 and over in
USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
Sweden
and Japan
between 1940 and 2040.
Overall
, the diagram shows a substantial increase in the elderly population across all three countries throughout the period.
Initially
, USA
had the highest Correct article usage
the USA
number of
population in Correct quantifier usage
apply
this
proportion, with 9%, followed by sweden
Change the capitalization
Sweden
just
over 5%. The lowest proportion was seen in Change preposition
at just
Japan
at approximately 5%. The USA
and Sweden
began slightly increasing the following year , but Japan
began gradually decreasing.
The USA
reached a peak in 1980, contributing to around 15% of the population proportion next was Sweden
just under 15% during the same period of time. In contrast
, Japan
began plateauing throughout the period from 1960 till the end of the 1980's
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1980s
However
, it began increasing in the succeeding years, reaching well above 25% at the beginning of 2040. Additionally
, Sweden
and Japan
continued to rise marginally in the following years.Submitted by sajeehulzamans on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, sweden, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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