You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The picture illustrates the
city
planners of Brandfield that has decided city
planners to develop a new shopping mall for the area, have
Correct word choice
and have
been
proposed S1 and S2, Unnecessary verb
apply
along with
other
2 sites.
Correct article usage
the other
According to
the diagram, there are several sections in the Brandfield areas, where golf
Correct article usage
the golf
center
Change the spelling
centre
in
the east area, and the Add a missing verb
is in
city
center
is located in the central. Afterwards, the railway will be built from Change the spelling
centre
southeast
build through Correct article usage
the southeast
Correct article usage
the northewest
northewest
. Correct your spelling
northwest
north-west
Likewise
the river, the road will go through
northeast to central Change preposition
from
then
through southeast.
On the other hand
, there will be housing estate and industrial estate as well. The housing estate will be located in the north area, near the road, railway, and river. Wheareas
, the industrial estates Correct your spelling
Whereas
is
constructed smaller than the housing Change the verb form
are
one
, and located opposite the housing in the Correct pronoun usage
ones
eastsouth
of the Correct your spelling
east south
east-south
city
also
crossing by railway and lane.Submitted by pratiwi.fadhilah11 on
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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