You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The picture illustrates the
city
planners of Brandfield that has decided
city
planners to develop a new shopping mall for the area,
have
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and have
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been
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apply
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proposed S1 and S2,
along with
other
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the other
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2 sites.
According to
the diagram, there are several sections in the Brandfield areas, where
golf
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the golf
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center
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centre
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in
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is in
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the east area, and the
city
center
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centre
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is located in the central. Afterwards, the railway will be built from
southeast
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the southeast
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build through
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the northewest
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northewest
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northwest
north-west
.
Likewise
the river, the road will go
through
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from
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northeast to central
then
through southeast.
On the other hand
, there will be housing estate and industrial estate as well. The housing estate will be located in the north area, near the road, railway, and river.
Wheareas
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Whereas
, the industrial estates
is
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are
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constructed smaller than the housing
one
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ones
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, and located opposite the housing in the
eastsouth
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east south
east-south
of the
city
also
crossing by railway and lane.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • city planners
  • proposed
  • shopping mall
  • the main features
  • comparisons
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • recommendation
  • site selection
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