The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture below demonstrates the
process
of production of Use synonyms
bricks
for the construction industry.
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Overall
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it is clear that
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this
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process
requires 8 steps, starting with digging the Use synonyms
clay
by using an excavator and ending with delivering the resulting fragments.
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To begin
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at the first stage
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process
, the Use synonyms
clay
is dug by an excavator, Use synonyms
then
collected Linking Words
clay
goes through a metal grid, and the Use synonyms
clay
is Use synonyms
then
rolled. At the next stage, we can notice that water and sand are mixed together and after the resulting Linking Words
clay
is Use synonyms
also
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mixture, Linking Words
then
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this
thing goes through a wire cutter to be the right shape or it is moulded. Linking Words
Bricks
are dried in the oven for approximately 24-28 hours.
The following step presents that the drying Use synonyms
process
consists of 3 different stages Use synonyms
such
as moderate,high and cooling. Linking Words
Firstly
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bricks
are heated at a moderate temperature which is around 200-900 Celsius, Use synonyms
then
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this
kiln transits to a high level of temperature (870-1300), and in the end, the Linking Words
bricks
are cooled in the cool freezer for 48-72 hours. At the 7th stage of Use synonyms
this
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process
, the resulting Use synonyms
bricks
are packaged, and Use synonyms
then
they are delivered by special trucks to the building companies.Linking Words
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