The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture below demonstrates the
process
of production of
bricks
for the construction industry.
Overall
,
it is clear that
this
process
requires 8 steps, starting with digging the
clay
by using an excavator and ending with delivering the resulting fragments.
To begin
,
at the first stage
of the
process
, the
clay
is dug by an excavator,
then
collected
clay
goes through a metal grid, and the
clay
is
then
rolled. At the next stage, we can notice that water and sand are mixed together and after the resulting
clay
is
also
added into
this
mixture,
then
this
thing goes through a wire cutter to be the right shape or it is moulded.
Bricks
are dried in the oven for approximately 24-28 hours. The following step presents that the drying
process
consists of 3 different stages
such
as moderate,high and cooling.
Firstly
, the
bricks
are heated at a moderate temperature which is around 200-900 Celsius,
then
this
kiln transits to a high level of temperature (870-1300), and in the end, the
bricks
are cooled in the cool freezer for 48-72 hours. At the 7th stage of
this
process
, the resulting
bricks
are packaged, and
then
they are delivered by special trucks to the building companies.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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