The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture below demonstrates the
process
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of production of
bricks
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for the construction industry.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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this
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process
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requires 8 steps, starting with digging the
clay
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by using an excavator and ending with delivering the resulting fragments.
To begin
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,
at the first stage
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of the
process
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, the
clay
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is dug by an excavator,
then
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collected
clay
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goes through a metal grid, and the
clay
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is
then
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rolled. At the next stage, we can notice that water and sand are mixed together and after the resulting
clay
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is
also
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added into
this
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mixture,
then
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this
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thing goes through a wire cutter to be the right shape or it is moulded.
Bricks
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are dried in the oven for approximately 24-28 hours. The following step presents that the drying
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consists of 3 different stages
such
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as moderate,high and cooling.
Firstly
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, the
bricks
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are heated at a moderate temperature which is around 200-900 Celsius,
then
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this
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kiln transits to a high level of temperature (870-1300), and in the end, the
bricks
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are cooled in the cool freezer for 48-72 hours. At the 7th stage of
this
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process
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, the resulting
bricks
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are packaged, and
then
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they are delivered by special trucks to the building companies.
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Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, bricks, clay with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacture
  • brick(s)
  • building industry
  • digging
  • extraction
  • raw material
  • clay
  • mixing
  • moulding
  • wire cutting
  • drying oven
  • firing
  • kiln
  • high temperatures
  • hardening
  • cooling
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • traditional
  • modern
  • environmental considerations
  • sustainability practices
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