The charts give information about the proportions of boys and girls of a school who achieved high grades (A or B + ) in respective courses. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart shows information about the proportions of
boys
and Use synonyms
girls
in a school who achieved high grades in their respective courses.
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Overall
, as we can see obviously Linking Words
girls
are outperformed in most areas. Especially, it is noticeable that there are significant differences in Chemistry and Computer Science. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
boys
had a great achievement in Geography.
A similar percentage is in three subjects: Use synonyms
girls
had 36.7% and Use synonyms
Boys
had 34.6% in Physics. There are 47.4% for Use synonyms
girls
and 46.8% for Use synonyms
boys
in Foreign Languages, 49.2% for Use synonyms
girls
and 48.4% for Use synonyms
boys
in Mathematics. Use synonyms
In contrast
, there was 30.2% for Linking Words
girls
and 14.1% for Use synonyms
boys
in Chemistry. There was 56.3% for Use synonyms
girls
and 42.1% for Use synonyms
boys
. And there was 20.1% for Use synonyms
girls
and 30.4% for Use synonyms
boys
. There is a big gap of 10% in Chemistry and Computer Science between the girl group and the boy group Use synonyms
whereas
, in Geography Linking Words
boys
were better than Use synonyms
girls
. It seems that the Use synonyms
boys
are good at geographical knowledge.Use synonyms
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