The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years . The graph shows the average number of meals eaten in fast - food restaurants and sit - down restaurants per family .
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of money
spending
on home-cooked Replace the word
spent
meal
and outside foods from 1970 to 2000. The unit given is percentages. The line graph displays data on people Fix the agreement mistake
meals
preferred
eating Correct pronoun usage
who preferred
juck
food or Correct your spelling
junk
dine
in Wrong verb form
dining
restaurant
based on the same period.
Add an article
a restaurant
the restaurant
Overall
, a decrease
demand for home cooking seemed to correspond to a higher demand for fast foods and eating out over the recorded period.
Looking at the pie chart, in 1970, households enjoyed cooking rather than spending on establishment Change the verb form
decreased
meals
, 90% and 10%, respectively. However
, people started to go out Change preposition
to restaurant
restaurant
to eat Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
since
1980 Change preposition
in
then
by 2000, half of the population spent their budget on restaurant
Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
while
other
half on home-cooked Correct article usage
the other
meals
.
Regarding line
graph, both showed Correct article usage
the line
a
upward trend and Change the article
an
have
Wrong verb form
had
a
same digit in the initial year, 20 Correct article usage
the
meals
each. In the following year, more people dine
in compared to Wrong verb form
dined
order
out fast Wrong verb form
ordering
foods
with 35 and 28 Fix the agreement mistake
food
meals
, respectively in 1980. However
, sitdown restaurant
meals
experienced a soar and reaching to
a peak point at 85 Wrong verb form
reached
meals
in
the year's end. As for take out Change preposition
at
order
had a steady rise, at which point reached Fix the agreement mistake
orders
to
50 Change preposition
apply
meals
in 2000.Submitted by tifjong on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words restaurant, meals with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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