The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and all graduates who got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia and also show the average salary of both these types of grads, from 2004 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the percentage of math graduates and all graduates who got full-time jobs after graduating from a university in Australia and also show the average salary of both these types of grads, from 2004 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of math and all
graduates
now working as a full-timer after completing their degree in
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Australia
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university from 2004 to 2012. The unit given is percentages. The table displays data on average
wage
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based on the same
graduates
and period.
Overall
, both
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worker
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with degree holders ended at the same number as in the initial year,
whereas
maths
garduates
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graduates
average salary was greater than all
graduates
in 2012. Looking at the line graph, maths
garduates
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graduates
started at three-fifths before reaching
to
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90% in 2006.
However
, in the following year, it experienced a drop until hitting
the
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lowest point
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for 80%. All
graduates
fell a close
second,
accounting
at
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two-fifths
then
a slight rise to 90% after two years. From 2006 to 2008, it had a hovering trend stood at three-fifths, at which point reached at lowest point of 60% in 2012. Regarding incomes, both had the same salary of $41,000 in 2004. In 2008, it showed a difference in both pay rates, especially in math
graduates
earned
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$50,000, which
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than $ 5000 than all
graduates
. In 2012, math
graduates
earned $56,000 and all
graduates
earned $ 51,000.
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