The charts below show the number of international students in Canada and USA in 2002 and 2003, also the changes of the increase in student population over the two years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables below
illustrates
the quantities and increasing percentages of Change the verb form
illustrate
foreigner
learners in the years 2002 and 2003 in Canada and America respectively. Generally, there were obviously more international students in the Replace the word
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USA
and most of them were Indian, compared the
dominant Chinese people in Canadian schools.
In Canada, the number of foreigners at universities was 6978 in 2002 and China accounted for the highest number at 3100, followed by Change preposition
to the
USA
and India with Correct article usage
the USA
the
figures of 2243 and 1635 respectively. When it comes to 2003, there were 8517 students and almost half of them were Chinese, which increased evidently by 27%, followed by India with Correct article usage
apply
the
significant upward of 50%(2460). Meanwhile, America saw a decrease of 6% with only 2101 students in Canada.
As for Correct article usage
a
USA
, 23525 and 26989 persons came there to receive education in 2002 and 2003 respectively. Correct article usage
the USA
In addition
, Indian people witnessed the
huge increase of 29%, from 11023 in 2002 to 14230 in 2003, which Correct article usage
a
were
around double times the figures Correct subject-verb agreement
was
of
Chinese, which increased by 33%. Change preposition
for
Additionally
, only Canadian learners became fewer in USA
, with Correct article usage
the USA
the
quantity of 6852 in 2002 and Correct article usage
a
then
it went down with
the proportion of 23%, Change preposition
to
finally
reached
5214 in 2003.Wrong verb form
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