The diagram below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates how to recycle
bottles
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from wasted
glass
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bottles
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.
Overall
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,
It is clear that
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there are three distinct stages in the manufacturing process for making recycled
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, starting from collecting old
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bottles
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to selling them in supermarkets.
At the first stage
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in the process, wasted
bottles
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are gathered at a collection point, and
then
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those
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are transported by lorries.
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the second stage shown on the diagram, these
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are cleaned with high-pressure water before being classified by colours: clear, green and grown.
Next,
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the categorised
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are sent to the plant where they are burned in finance and
then
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are turned into liquid
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.
Then
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, both recycled liquid
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and new liquid
glass
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are poured into a mould.
Finally
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, these newly made
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are transported to a wide range of supermarkets, where they will be sold to customers.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bottles, glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Glass bottles
  • Collected
  • Sorting
  • Colour
  • Washing
  • Impurities
  • Residues
  • Crushing
  • Cullets
  • Melting
  • Furnace
  • Molten glass
  • Molding
  • Shaping and forming processes
  • Cooling and solidifying
  • Inspection
  • Distribution
  • Retailers
  • Manufacturers
  • Reuse
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