The diagram below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how to recycle
bottles
from wasted glass
bottles
.
Overall
, It is clear that
there are three distinct stages in the manufacturing process for making recycled bottles
, starting from collecting old glass
bottles
to selling them in supermarkets.
At the first stage
in the process, wasted bottles
are gathered at a collection point, and then
those bottles
are transported by lorries.
At
the second stage shown on the diagram, these Change preposition
In
bottles
are cleaned with high-pressure water before being classified by colours: clear, green and grown. Next,
the categorised bottles
are sent to the plant where they are burned in finance and then
are turned into liquid glass
. Then
, both recycled liquid glass
and new liquid glass
are poured into a mould.
Finally
, these newly made bottles
are transported to a wide range of supermarkets, where they will be sold to customers.Submitted by 2631272260 on
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