The diagram below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how to recycle
bottles
from wasted Use synonyms
glass
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bottles
.
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Overall
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It is clear that
there are three distinct stages in the manufacturing process for making recycled Linking Words
bottles
, starting from collecting old Use synonyms
glass
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bottles
to selling them in supermarkets.
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At the first stage
in the process, wasted Linking Words
bottles
are gathered at a collection point, and Use synonyms
then
those Linking Words
bottles
are transported by lorries.
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At
the second stage shown on the diagram, these Change preposition
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bottles
are cleaned with high-pressure water before being classified by colours: clear, green and grown. Use synonyms
Next,
the categorised Linking Words
bottles
are sent to the plant where they are burned in finance and Use synonyms
then
are turned into liquid Linking Words
glass
. Use synonyms
Then
, both recycled liquid Linking Words
glass
and new liquid Use synonyms
glass
are poured into a mould.
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Finally
, these newly made Linking Words
bottles
are transported to a wide range of supermarkets, where they will be sold to customers.Use synonyms
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