The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides key information about how much electricity was produced and used in 2014
among
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10 different countries.
Overall
, it is shown from the graph that China and the United States surpassed the other countries in terms of usage and production
whereas
The Republic of Korea was at the bottom of the chart.
To begin
with, It can be said that , Despite the high rise
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Electricity production and consumption in America and China, the other eight countries illustrate a
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decrease. Russia's rate of consuming electricity and using it is nearly the same with 1.038 and 1,057 kWh respectively.
In addition
,we can say the same about Japan with
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rise in creating power .
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