The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie graph illustrates
that
the career of anthropology Correct word choice
apply
graduates
after they complete their undergraduate degree courses, and the table shows income
of anthropology Correct article usage
the income
graduates
from different types of employment.
The majority of graduates
are employed, and about half of graduates
have full-time jobs.Compared to 20% who doing
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do
part time
jobs, 13% of Add a hyphen
part-time
graduates
go on to graduate school, some of them also
working part-time. Most of the remaining 20% of graduates
are unemployed, and some do not know what to do.
In the table,after working for 5 years,the majority of graduates
who worked for the freelance consultants and government sector can earn more than $75000,while
only a fifth of graduates
in this
type of employment can earn $25000-$75000. In contrast
, 55% of graduates
working in the
private companies earn a minimum wage of $75,000 or more, Correct article usage
apply
while
about 35% of private companies employees earn between $50,000 and $75,000.
All in all, most graduates
find jobs and earn higher salary
Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
in
freelance consultants and government sector than in Change preposition
as
the
private companies.Correct article usage
apply
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