The bar chart shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph chart shows the number of global
sales
during the years
2000 till 2006 of different types of digital games
. Handheld games
topped the list each year
where as
Console Correct your spelling
whereas
games
lost their popularity over the years
.
Handheld games
started with 11 billion
dollars
in sales
in 2001 while
they continued to grow steadily over the Correct word choice
apply
years
and reached 18 billion
dollars
in sales
in the year
2006. Console games
, which started at 6 billion
dollars
in the year
2000 lost its
fanbase over the Correct pronoun usage
their
years
and showed a significant decrease each year
till it
reached 3 Correct pronoun usage
they
billion
dollars
in the year
2006. Even though online games
had no relevance till 2001 they suddenly gained popularity over the years
and showed a steady increase in sales
starting from 1 billion
dollars
in 2002 to approximately 9 billion
dollars
in the year
2006. Mobile phone games
which started to gain relevance in the same year
as
and had the same Correct word choice
apply
sales
as online games
, showed a significant increase in the year
2003 and reached 3 billion
dollars
. Although
Online games
grew more popularity than mobile phone games
in 2005, mobile phones
Change the noun form
phone
games
have showed
a steady increase since 2004 and have crossed 7 Change the verb form
shown
billion
dollars
in sales
in 2006.
To conclude
, Handheld games
have been ever growing whereas
new methods of gaming are coming to light.Submitted by satyarthverma88 on
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