The bar chart shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
The graph chart shows the number of global
sales
during the
years
2000 till 2006 of different types of digital
games
. Handheld
games
topped the list each
year
where as
Correct your spelling
whereas
show examples
Console
games
lost their popularity over the
years
. Handheld
games
started with 11
billion
dollars
in
sales
in 2001
while
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
they continued to grow steadily over the
years
and reached 18
billion
dollars
in
sales
in the
year
2006. Console
games
, which started at 6
billion
dollars
in the
year
2000 lost
its
Correct pronoun usage
their
show examples
fanbase over the
years
and showed a significant decrease each
year
till
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
show examples
reached 3
billion
dollars
in the
year
2006. Even though online
games
had no relevance till 2001 they suddenly gained popularity over the
years
and showed a steady increase in
sales
starting from 1
billion
dollars
in 2002 to approximately 9
billion
dollars
in the
year
2006. Mobile phone
games
which started to gain relevance in the same
year
as
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
and had the same
sales
as online
games
, showed a significant increase in the
year
2003 and reached 3
billion
dollars
.
Although
Online
games
grew more popularity than mobile phone
games
in 2005, mobile
phones
Change the noun form
phone
show examples
games
have
showed
Change the verb form
shown
show examples
a steady increase since 2004 and have crossed 7
billion
dollars
in
sales
in 2006.
To conclude
, Handheld
games
have been ever growing
whereas
new methods of gaming are coming to light.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, years, games, year, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • global sales
  • digital games
  • billions of dollars
  • consistent increase
  • significant decrease
  • notable spikes
  • market share
  • growth trends
  • internet accessibility
  • gaming technology
  • sales figures
  • game types
  • bar chart
  • data analysis
  • proportions
  • observed trends
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