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The following diagram is a flowchart of the process of recycling of the plastic bottles for production of new products

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The following diagram is a flowchart of the process of recycling
of
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the
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plastic
bottles
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 for
production
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the production
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 of new products. It starts with the collection of used plastic
bottles
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 from people which are
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 taken to a recycling facility. In the recycling
center
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, the
bottles
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 are separated
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 their type and the quality of the material. The
bottles
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 are
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 compressed into large blocks in order to ease the handling of the
bottles
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 after the sorting process. These blocks are
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 crushed into small sizes and the resultant sizes are washed to eliminate any impurities. The clean plastic fragments
are
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then
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 melt down and formed into small pellets. These pellets are used as the input in the manufacture of different products from plastics. The pellets are
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 heated once more and
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 pressed into various shapes depending on the final product
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 required.
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, these new products,
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example
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bottles
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, clothes or packaging material, are used by the consumers.
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 process helps to minimize the use of plastics and
support
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supports
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 the principles of environmental management by transforming waste into a useful product.
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introduction conclusion present
Consider including a brief introduction and conclusion to your essay to enhance the overall structure and provide a clear beginning and end.
logical structure
To further strengthen coherence and cohesion, make use of more linking words and phrases such as 'firstly', 'then', 'next', 'subsequently', etc., to clearly signal the progression from one step to the next in the process.
supported main points
Provide a brief final sentence summarizing the importance of the recycling process and its benefits for environmental sustainability. This can help in creating a strong conclusion to your essay.
complete response
The essay provides a thorough and detailed description of the recycling process for plastic bottles, covering all major steps from collection to production of new products.
logical structure
The steps in the process are presented in a logical sequence, making it easy for the reader to follow.
clear comprehensive ideas
The ideas are clear and the language used is appropriate and varied. Terms like 'compressed', 'crushed', 'melt down', and 'pressed' were effectively used to describe the physical changes involved.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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